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Tuesday, January 16, 2007

On a Desperate Day

Caught,
In the middle of the endless sea of thought
I swim, but do not reach the coast;
I see, but won't listen anymore;
I bleed, but I do not feel my bones.
Am I? I wonder, am I not?
Whose devil wrote this endless plot?
I wonder, but the answer is just lost;
For there is nothing, I perceive my senses not,
I feel nothing,
Anymore.


Driven by desperation, you are sure not to get anywhere. But how shall one resist it in the days of gloom?

7 Comments:

Blogger sham_rock said...

These are days of gloom and sadness and desperation :(

11:44 AM  
Blogger Soldier of Fortune said...

I like it :-)

But, right, it's sad and all that. Sad Smilie Time! --> :-(







...but I like it :-)

11:53 AM  
Blogger sham_rock said...

Why on the hell do you write with such a good style??? It really hurts my self-confidence xDD

11:54 AM  
Blogger sham_rock said...

"Whose devil wrote this endless plot?"

The more I read this line, the more I like it. it's brilliant, I promise :)

12:49 PM  
Blogger Tiny Dancer said...

I promise I'll never publish anything here.

Just one thing for all of you: Never ever forget to smile ;-)

2:43 PM  
Blogger Sing to me, Prufrock! said...

I'm really glad you like it so much, but I'm afraid you look at it trough the subjective eyes of friendship :)

By the way, all of us should publish here, that's the beauty of the idea. Maybe you do not consider your writings worth it... Come on!!!
Two things: one tends to underestimate their work, since the creator is aware of every tiny flaw (even non existent ones; and, most important, this is just a freaky blog!!!

11:38 PM  
Blogger hythlodaeus said...

Subjective eyes of friendship?
but, what's poetry, then?
Is it not subjectivity?
Yes it is.
I like it, and the moment I say "I", I'm giving my opinion, my subjective (not necessarily by the eyes of friendship but subjective al fin y al cabo, puto inglés) opinion, but it's all we can do. I wouldn't dare to say a poem is good or bad, only whether I like it or not.

and i really like this one.

In days of gloom and sadness, the eyes (and whole body) of friendship will be there. that should be enough ;)

P.D I get the (strange?) feeling that you can misunderstand my words (thanks to my accurate and fluent English ¬¬). i hope you don't :) the purpose was to be kind, I swear.

9:21 AM  

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